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For a moment,
they bob,
these dull black balloons,
tethered to the traffic lights
in stringtime contemplation,
hermetic thoughts
jostle and tangle,
in colourless mirror-image
inscrutability,
safe
to dream themselves red-hot
airships unleashed,
cerulean adventures
aloft a blue-moon day.
xxxxxxx
Wonderfully talented photographer Madelaine Cappuccio has teamed my poem ‘Pedestrian’ with one of her beautiful balloon photos over at her blog, Images by Madelaine Cappuccio.
Thanks, Madelaine 😀
Great originality, BB, and such colourful language.
I really enjoyed this.
Thank you
John
Thank you, John 🙂
By the way, BB, I have just purchased your Good Read “when the air hits your brain”
It is of especial interest since June’s triple brain surgery.
Thank you for the recommendation
John
Gosh, John, June has been through such a lot. I was aware that she had had neurosurgey and had suffered a complication afterwards, but triple brain surgery?! How very stressful and exhausting for her, and for you and the family. I hope she is getting stronger now.
I’d be interested to hear what you think of the book. Besides the neuroscience aspect of it (which is always so fascinating), I found Vertosick’s honesty about his fallibilities and the mental pathologies (God complexes, etc) in the profession very interesting. Coincidentally, I finished reading it not long before a friend was diagnosed with a glioma which turned out to be a grade III. The tremendous care and communication that she has had from the medical profession through her surgery and beyond makes me suspect that the medical educators are placing a lot more emphasis on the soft skills requirements of the profession than they used to. Best wishes and strength to you both, John. Thanks, BB.
Such a visual poem…love the images you create.
Thanks, Charles – winter’s getting to me, haha
Hermetic thoughts that jostle – really rich language!
Thanks, Gilly 😀 I look at people standing at the traffic lights and wish someone would just burst into song or tell a joke or something – winter’s such a repressive season! (and if you’re wondering why I don’t lead the way, I can’t sing and am a hopeless joke-teller ;-))
tethered black balloons dreaming themselves red-hot airships unleashed … pure magic!
Thanks, Christine 🙂 The unspoken uniform of winter in the CBD is black clothes, and sombre pallid faces. I love it when someone breaks out in alarming colour – a yellow coat or fuchsia pink scarf, haha
You are so talented – this is wonderful!
Wow 😀 Thanks, Julie.
You conjure up such images. I also love the image of the hermetic thoughts – that is an outstanding image. You’ve done it again. FABAMUNDO!!!
And you have coined a new word – FABAMUNDO! 😀 Thanks, Selma. I often wonder what people standing at traffic lights are thinking – do you have any suggestions? 😉
Now there’s a great idea for a story, Bluebee. What people are thinking at the lights…. it has a lot of scope because people could be thinking about anything. Thanks for the idea!
Great, Selma – looking forward to what you come up with 🙂
hahaha – that is exactly what it is like standing at the lights in the city – all the grave looking faces (I used to be one of those 😉 ) contemplating the dull work day and other worries – love ‘dull black balloons’ – haha – we need Benedicte to draw the cartoon – one could read ‘hope the bloody dog doesn’t destroy the doona again’ or ‘when is my boss going to have a heart attack!’ Good one bb 🙂
I’m sure many have versions of that last thought, Gabe, hahaha. I’m still one of those black balloons occasionally – my traffic-light thoughts alternate between “I wish I was on a cycling holiday in rural Japan” or “I wish I was snorkelling with marine iguana in the Galapagos” to “Oh, @#$$%, I’m sure I’ve left the iron on” 🙂
And yes, great idea re Benedicte – I absolutely love her ‘Mind’ series 🙂
Nicely done! I expect that balloons (like us?) prefer untethered flight to tethered fantasies.
Thanks, Nancy. yes, I’m sure they do 😉 (unless they’ve been reading that abomination “Fifty Shades of Grey” haha)
I love the poem! Did you write it? Maybe I can add it to the balloon post?
Thanks, Madelaine – yes, all the poetry on this blog is written by me unless expressly indicated otherwise. As long as it is credited to my blog, I would love it and be honoured if you would add it to your beautiful balloon photo post. Thanks 😀
Hi, I’d love to put it on my blog. Thanks 🙂
Hi-I have another balloon post for tomorrow, so I’ve attached it to that one. 🙂 TY……It’s beautiful
Thanks, Madelaine 😀
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I read this before lunchtime … before I was standing before said black balloons … and it changed the colour of my day. Thank you 🙂
Haha – thanks, Geoff 🙂
Enjoyed the imagery in your poem too. 😉
Hope everyone will start dressing in brighter colours now that it’s Spring here 🙂