17 thoughts on “Zombie-ku

      • you’ve learnt well 😀 stuff the purists – breaking the rules is the best thing about haiku – hahaha (but I’ve read some horrific ku on the internet that don’t go anywhere near the essence of a ku, and yours is really good – it is a moment in time captured and there is a contrast or surprise between the first two lines and the last – an aha moment of sorts (it even captures the weather, if not a season, with the wind turbines – hahaha) and is telling of our times!

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