you’ve learnt well 😀 stuff the purists – breaking the rules is the best thing about haiku – hahaha (but I’ve read some horrific ku on the internet that don’t go anywhere near the essence of a ku, and yours is really good – it is a moment in time captured and there is a contrast or surprise between the first two lines and the last – an aha moment of sorts (it even captures the weather, if not a season, with the wind turbines – hahaha) and is telling of our times!
brilliant bb, they are so large we cannot help but notice them, alien beings indeed!
Thanks, Christine. I can’t help but think of zombie arms when I see them looming large on the hillsides 😀
Wonderful ku, you!
A bit of ku fun 😀 Thanks.
What an interesting poem for that picture…made me smile.
hehe
Yes that sums them up brilliantly!
They are rather strange 😀 Thx
The effects of that photo are just perfect for the march of the zombies
I expect them to uproot themselves at any minute and stumble down the hill 😀 Thanks, Jacquie.
Aaaaaargh! They’re coming to get us!
Ja – better run, Col! 😀
Great write to match the pic, Bb!
Thanks, Adee 🙂
great ku bb 😀 they do have an alien quality to them, the wind turbines
I’ve learnt everything I know about letting loose with ku from you, Gabe 😀 The purists will be choking on their 100-year-old sake, haha.
you’ve learnt well 😀 stuff the purists – breaking the rules is the best thing about haiku – hahaha (but I’ve read some horrific ku on the internet that don’t go anywhere near the essence of a ku, and yours is really good – it is a moment in time captured and there is a contrast or surprise between the first two lines and the last – an aha moment of sorts (it even captures the weather, if not a season, with the wind turbines – hahaha) and is telling of our times!